I can't!!!

by Katelyn   Jul 20, 2005


No one understands
people just walk away
like nothings wrong
they know
they just don't want to
i hate them
they're perfect
so they don't care
i can't take it anymore
i sat there
taking it
like i should
but i can't
as i sit here with the gun
in hand,
i think of all the people
i will be leaving but then
i think of what a cruel world it is
i make up my mind
i slowly pull the trigger, now there is no turning back
and the last sound i hear
is the gun shot that has
ended my life
there i lay with the blood dripping from my head,
with but one regret,
that i left my family and friends
that cared about me so much
i'm sorry that i hurt them so bad
but i had no chose
the only thing left of me is a memory
that will stay forever
in my families hearts
but i am gone
and now i leave you with my last
good bye!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    hey hun! I really loved this poem. So much emotion was put into it...It was amazingly sad. If you are ever really feeling like this, I am always here if you need to talk. Excellent job. Take care

  • 18 years ago

    by DAYLON

    I agree with missy it could have been longer, good poem. Your could have wrote something like this. While I held the gun in the palm of my hand, I could feel the pressure building up inside my mind. Banging away, sending me insane, while the blood started to pour out of my eyes, as I within that moment pulled the trigger. Bullet spiralled through my head, cutting away at my temple, leaving behind my brains splattered across the wall. Something like that. I hope I was some help.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    It should be a little longer. The gun shot makes it a little more understandable, but instead of it being right after the bang put, so I hold the gun before it or something

  • 18 years ago

    by dArKgOtHiCgIrL

    oo thats really sad! very well written though

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