wow!!! loved that poem....i was crying when i got to the end!!!

WOW that's deep... AMAZING!!!

check mine out some time...

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

this is good and sad too. im sorry thats your story, i hope things change for you.

That was extremly well written. You can almost feel like you're there watching everything happen. I know what its like to cut and just want everything to go away, so I really relate to this story.

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

wow what an amazing poem
it was so sad so emotional and so well written that i cant find the right words to explain how i feel
stay strong and good job

i just want to congradulate you for having the power to write somthing with so much meaning to your life!! must have been hard but you must be so strong to b able to! i hope you dont take you life from this occuring you have no need to feel alone and you dont deserve this pain thats being conflicted on yourself!! do somthing dont let this happen! ill always be here to help you! i really will
love britt x x x please think about what i have sed read deep into it!!
YOUR BEAUTIFUL!

omg i don't know what to say, i sort of understand, my life is sort of like that but not as bad!!!
i love it, it's perfect, keep up the good work!!!
luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

omg that is such an awesome poem!!!You're a great writer!! The way you expressed yourself is just so amazing and also very sad.I go through the yelling and screaming but not the hitting I am very truley sorry that it has to be you when it shouldnt hasve to be anybody,Stay strong and take care!
Luv ya,
<3Linzee<3

i really liked u're poem...

wow sorry you go through this it sounds like hell...but this poem was amazing it all went together and ryhmed it was just great....NICE job!

this poem is very well written, if flows well and gives great description, it was very sad and i feel for you.

Great job!! I hope your alright! Hang in there!! 5/5 Keep writing!!

wow great poem! you are such an excellent writer it's so very sad... stay strong and take care
--BrokenSmile

so sad so true so amazing please read my poetry and vote/comment thanx

That was really good! -claps- Bravo.

Here,
-Razor-

I go through this alot myself my dad never hits me but he does hurt me emotionally and sometimes I feel scared of him and threatened but I do know that loves me and he would probably do anything for me he just has a bad temper and doesn't know how to control it sometimes if you ever need anyone to talk to my e-mail address is charityeggink@hotmail.com

woah...trhat was an amazing poem...omg never stop writting....

that is really good and really touching...5/5

Wow that was so amazing,lots of emotion!Great poem,loved it!Keep it up!Lots of love and hugs,Becklin

GOD BLESS

By the Way my gurl go through the samething.