Tears of Stars

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jul 21, 2005


It's 2:30 AM
In this sleepless dark
The scars are burning
But I don't see a mark

The crying of stars
Has awoken my heart
I think this is where
It all began to start

Words of a lesser
Probably helped it began
That's probably where
These burning tears ran

Your pictured smile
In my heart it's stuck
Beating my love
I guess I'm out of luck

I know I'm over you
You're over me too
Jealousy now burns
Leaving us in two

You got angry
Because I went with her
But you were with him
As in one sad blur

Give me one more chance
To explain about me
Otherwise as two
We'll remain to be

I love you Brandy!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    am speechless.. this is absolutely breath-taking.. i love it.. i love ur rhyme and ur deep words... the flow is gr8.. i adored ur 2nd stanza, especially the line 'has awaken my heart'.. reli gr8.. gave u a 5
    keep it ups!
    nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awesome job! really very lovely.. I hope she gives u another chance! Esp. since the poem was so great! anyways very well writtn keep it up! 5/5! u kan chek out some of my poems if u want Great job!