Worst enemy

by undying blusher   Jul 21, 2005


No!
Please don’t leave me
With my worst enemy
Without you my self-esteem is at zero
Rather, it dips below
Without you I feel hatred arouse
Without you, all there is
Is my awful enemy
Please don’t leave me with her!
Giver her time, she’ll destroy my core

Your smile
Your glance
Your voice
Your hand

I almost believe you,
Your compliments
When you’re gone
All she does is argue
And my belief doth perish altogether
The positive is gone
Only negativity left over
Without you I shall fall
I shall crash and burn
And continue downward

So I beg you
Don’t leave me
She is heartless & unforgiving
Without you I’m merely me
Left alone with my worst enemy

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  • 18 years ago

    by jamie ellen

    I rather like this poem people can find there own meaning for instance I was thinking this enemy could be your self? Haha yeah over analytical prob not close at all but I loved it all the same keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Wonderful poem. i liked it very much, i think there are a lot of poems that i would have put on your featured list if i were you, well different ones. I think this one is something that you shouldn't move aside, so far i love your recent poems more then i do your featured poems. I think they are totally amazing, in every spectrum of poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Great poem, could relate to it. Sometimes you do need the backing of a friend to help you through an awkward situation. Good work. Kind regards from Kane

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    I like this poem it reminds me of ppl I hate and ppl that dislike me..
    you did a very good jobz at writing this poem and I loved it!

    -Josiah

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