Sweet Temptions

by jello   Jul 23, 2005


Shattered dreams
Broken hearted
Alone
Forgotten
Frightened for my life
That I’ll actually give into the urge
To kill myself
To kill the pain
Will I ever die of old age?
Please god just let this be a faze
It always seizes to amaze me that
I’ve sunken this low
I’ve cried this much
I’ve died inside
Sometimes suicide can seem so sweet
To die
To renew my life
No more need for these tears
I’m now pain free
Maybe I’ll live to see the day
When I can look back at all this
I’ll regret all the bad feelings and temptations
Oh sweet crimson regret
This depression has taken over me
It has changed me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Excellent hun....You will get through this. Just never give up

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I'm sure many people can relate - nicely written. The single worded lines stood out nicely - though the end wasn't as powerful as it could have been. Perhaps you could cut the poem down a little?

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Once again... Beautiful write. Keep it up...
    As always~ Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    What a wonderful poem, i sure hope you do live to see that day, and you can read this and think how happy you are, and how you have changed.

    But i sure hope, that you cope, and with such talent, a death would be a waste of such!
    Keep it srong, and keep up the poetry!

    Great work here!

    Jon
    x

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