Dear God

by midnight♥lullibys   Jul 25, 2005


Why do you taunt my feelings.
Let me fall in love,
I more than just stings
When you close all the doors..

I sit here all alone,
No one knows im crying,
Shivering to the bone.
Please know im trying..

Dangle him before me
Then let me kiss the dirt,
I wish you could just see
How bad it really hurts.

Blackend tears drop to the page
As i empty my soul.
Trapped tightly in this cage
I sob, pray for rescue.

So deep into the night,
Your just one call away.
But no my heart feels tight,
Break the rules if i may.

I love him and you know it,
Though you wont let us be.
Sick of dealing w/ this shit
So bye, smile be happy...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    This wasn't the best of your poesm, so I gave it a 4/5.

    Your other poems are more desribed, and this looks as though you gotten a bit lazy. =)

    However, I did enjoy it.

    I just thought you could have done better with your talent.

    My favourite lines were:

    "So deep into the night,
    Your just one call away.
    But no my heart feels tight,
    Break the rules if i may."

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a bit too choppy for me, was really hard to get through I think if you went through it sentance for sentance you would see my point anyway nice try. I like the idea though...

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I really like this! Mine are getting kinda scary, but if you want to ckeck them out that'd be great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I have to say this piece is unique! It's very powerful and deep! Your emotions showed very well! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    such sadness and sad emotions in this poem

    Good work

    -Josiah

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