Bliss suicide

by Robiie   Jul 25, 2005


Been so long since she felt like this,
A tingle here,
A tingle there,
A feeling that could almost be described as bliss...
A cut along her leg,
The feeling to feel like this...
Been so cold for so long,
Sometimes she still feels like she doesn't belong,
That she is wrong...
Tears will soon flow down those cheeks no more,
New blood flows behind this closed door,
Life draining down her arm,
Huddled on her bed,
She cries,
Her last so sorrow tears...
She has just committed,
Her bliss suicide...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    You are amazing.
    I love your writing so much,
    You are my inspiration.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bran

    Wow, that was soo good. Phff. i know what thats like im fifteen now and have been cutting since i was 12 so i mean, yeh well take care and keep up the good work. Check out some of my stuff if you want. xox bran*

  • 18 years ago

    by Chloe*

    This is short and awsome, if you wrote anymore i wouldnt like it lol...its purfect my love,
    Chloe^

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    great poem and depression emotion were shown plus sad I hope things are okay!

    -Josiah

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