Lets make this Place a better Place

by The Poetic Child   Jul 26, 2005


We Need Success,
and give god bless,
nothing less,
lets not take our anger,
and put kids in danger,
and put at stake,
cause u made a mistake,
cause u had to take,
your anger out,
on some little sprout,
starting shout,
getting a pout,
Just walking About,
minding his own business,
listen to this,
people think buying a gun,
is fun,
making people run,
having people pray like a catholic nun,
knowing that the gun,
was just like the gun,
We Get Shot By,
Taking our life's By,
Waving Goodbye,
We have adults dieing,
kids crying,
teens sighing,
but no ones trying,
We have Marines and soldiers,
holding boulders,
of Pain,
Like An Old man on a Cane,
its Hard,
But no one notices that while life's are taken,
life's and hearts are breaking,
having thugs,
bringing Drugs,
getting high,
yet they ain't gonna try,
To Stop the Madness,
the Sadness,
Thinking Drugs Are Cool,
using kids like a pack mule,
sitting on a stool,
drinking a nice cool
beer,
not seeing clear,
not seeing life's,
and wifes,
being shot,
and the guys think they hot,
but they not,
Drugs
and thugs,
we need to give out some hugs,
cause killing men,
and women,
ain't the way,
so I'm here to say,
Lets Make this Place,
a Better PLACE

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Great poem!! i love the meaning of the poem...get people thinking...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I really like the moral Rico Smoothie (hahaha, that always makes me giggle) and I have one kinda like it it's called "Act like men" take a look sometime please!