Back Home Tickets!

by R F   Jul 26, 2005


Back Home Tickets

Oh my best days
I just want to understand
what did I do to you?
why things went so fast?
days now I call you past

Oh my best days
my home I find in you
I miss you so
I can help not
peeking into memories
that I hold unto close

Oh my best days
I would do anything
I would trade these days
to get you back
I would buy my way back ticket
if they only sell tickets my way back

Copyright ©2005 Rua Francis

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  • 17 years ago

    by Andy

    Really really good poem :)!
    very creative with a good use of words too
    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Great!!! Simple but amazing!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by a bUi

    What can i say your poems are simple but so passionate and descriptive. i love it :)

  • 20 years ago

    by SSBAL

    GREAT POEM!
    wow, loooong time since i've even found time to sneak in here, but i did, 3 months after u're latest poem...hey canadian!

    ok, so i dunno if any1 i know from here still writes on here, i cant go on, so yea...

    but hey canadian!!!! it b the american!!! lol

    luv ya
    jo

  • 20 years ago

    by R F

    The best comment from my aunt:
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    Dear Rua, I am so glad to read your marvelous poem again, It was so touchy and I think you are putting your feet at the right step, but I would like to whisper in your ears, few warm words, Dont feel so blue!!! dont let your worlds upside down !! as you are so young and smart.

    May each day of yours be bright and beautiful!!!! so enjoy your life, as it is so short!!!

    Wish you all the best.

    Your aunt......Juliet ewaze

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