wow...thats so sad i like it though..but i hope that didnt relly happen cuz that wud be soooooooooooooo sad....*hugs*....5/5

larochelle

Damn this made me cry, this si soooo sad and heartbreaking....I'm so sorry for your loss (If this is a true story)....Hope that you are ok??? I think I shoukd have read part 1 before part 2 =0).....Great poem hun

*Hugs Sabrina*

Kit,

This is so heart wrenching and sad. Be strong. Good write.

Warm regards,

Steve

AAAAWWWWWW thats soo sad!! wait.. did your daddy realy die? if he did, i am srry!! its realy good tho!!
love you (as a friend) lol

WoW!!! nice poem. it seems like i need a rele long time to reach this perfect level of writing.

Plz read some of my poems coz i need some advices.

aww hun a very sad poem but a lovely one to write about your dad. Writing poetry about how you feel is a lovely way to express yourself hun
well done, 5/5

Beautiful... And so sad... :-( Great write. 5/5

Omg all ur poems make me cry.they're so great.i love them.im sorry about all the deaths in ur life.5/5

It's so sweet...so touching...it makes me cry..:'( girl, you are great.

Omg...im sooo sad right now...(cries)

Even though I hate war poems, this was an awsomne one...(sniff)

Hi huni luv da poem....i read a comment u wrote on angel living 4 g0d....n im sorry this is happeneing 2 u, if it makes u feel better the exact same thing is happeneing 2 me....da 1 i l0ve cheated den went 2 another pers0n n i feel so used anyways im always here if y0o need vent k huni...

It's really sad. But I must say a very well written poem! Great job!

Your poem was heartbreaking and it made me almost cry! i love your poems they really are great keep it up!

AmazinG!!!

Wow.. this is truely amazing.. keep it up .. very sad as well..

5/5

Aww
this poem touched my heart
very heartfelt and emotional!
I'm so sorry hun! hope you're Okay!
you're a gr8 writer keep it up
NemO x0x0x0x0x