Your Scapegoat

Oo I can relate. good job 5.5

The only on you blame
the only ONE you blame.
how do you get the last laugh if you die?? oh, well, I like the way this is written, very captivationg, 4/5

Bad place to be in,.. i hate the blame game, it gets u no where... i do think u could have taken this scapegoat concept further and extended it, but your work is your work.. good job ne way.. rhymes were right on but a bit too simple for my tastes, no worries,.. good job anyway

Wow, i love the ryhme in this poem, even without it, the words are amazing, but the rhyme makes it all that much more enjoyable:) Great job, keep it up. Also, I would greatly appreciate it if you could check out my poems too.

Ana*