Untitled(How could this happen to me)

by disturbed one   Jul 30, 2005


Just seeing her with him,
Aches me to my rim,

She used to be mine,
Everything was just fine,

Until he came along,
Now its all wrong,

Why cant she come back,
Come to me leave that quack.

not very good this was off the top of my head in like 2 or 3 minutes
haha i couldnt think of a title and then the song by simple plan came to mind and its the same story line(depression)so i thought what the heck might as well:P

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    I actually wasnt upset...cuz i couldnt get upset over u...like...ur not like...a tear-jerking movie....lmao...but u do make my blood boil too much...i wonder if u will shriver up into a cucumber...

    if u dont the comment which im sure u do...it was one of my gr 9 poems lmfao...that pretty much explains it...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    You seemed very upset when you wrote thing poem. If your blood boils too much..it will evaporate and you will shrivel up into a cucumber.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    haha thats funny. but that poem was really good for jus thinkin of it in like 2 minutes =)

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