Hope

by JL   Jul 31, 2005


Left all alone in the world
out in the pouring rain
staring at the orphanage
this is my new home, my mom proclaims

its not much to look at
the buildings tall and looks rundown
cars whiz by, splish splash
other than that, theres no sound

i wonder why we are here
no suitcases were brought
we make our way up the steps
suddenly my attention is caught

there, up in the sky,
was a rainbow, way up high
to my mother i said bye
but when the doors slammed shut i didn't cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Thank you!

  • 18 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    Great poem...5/5 nething else would be a SIN keep up the great work
    XxX
    angel

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    thank you! *hugs*

  • 18 years ago

    by Illusion

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    DFK :-D

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Amazing write.. I loved it 5/5 nothing less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne