Bleed My Pain Away (Song)

by erikka baby   Aug 1, 2005


Deep inside my heart
It's killing me to know that I can lose you
But I'm trying not to break apart
There's just one more thing I have to do

Slit my wrists, bleed my pain away
I can't take it, my heart is breakin'
Slit my wrist, bleed my pain away
deep inside, it's more than I can take

I love you so much, and I'm hurting so bad
The pain of losing you, is making me sad
I'm trying so hard, not to breakdown
But the mere thought of it, is making me frown

Slit my wrists, bleed my pain away
I can't take it, my heart is breakin'
Slit my wrist, bleed my pain away
deep inside, it's more than I can take

I'm trying so hard to keep it together
But sometimes the word forever
Doesn't always mean forever

That's why I'm going to

Slit my wrists, bleed my pain away
I can't take it, my heart is breakin'
Slit my wrist, bleed my pain away
deep inside, it's more than I can take

But if I die, then the pain will subside
No more worrying about you leaving
I have no more feelings left to hide

But deep inside, this is all more than I can take
And the thought of losing the best thing in my life
Is making my heartache

So slit my wrists and bleed my pain away
Because this feeling, is more than I can take

* Not a very good song, it's the first one I ever wrote so leave me comments so I can improve, thanks so much *

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  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    To be honest, I don't slit my wrists or anything. I just wrote it, I don't feel that way ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Its not bad at all, Im just not a fan of people who slit wrists....

  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    good emotion and expression in this one, try to spice up the word choice to make it more original, it has a lot of potential. very good for a first song, keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! that was great. the rhyming was perfect all the way thru.

  • 18 years ago

    by William Flores

    Hey i think its a pretty good song. you should write more! i think it would be good if you change the ending a little bit though but other than that its great!