She isn't real

by M MEM   Aug 1, 2005


She isn't real
Just a shell of a once human
She lost her soul a long time ago
Agony, tears, crys for help
No one listens
No one cares
She just rots away....

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I love the power it holds...it's a great short poem, but if possible, I'd like to see you expand on it... I have ones like this though...and it can be fine to leave it, you said what you wanted to say...keep it up ;)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    nice poem, very good job

  • 18 years ago

    by heather

    NiCe PoEm..I ReAlLy ThOuGhT It SaId SoMEtHiNg GooD JoB

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    this is a wicked poem..its short but means so much..5/5 great work keep it up

    Kaylee

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    I looove this poem! it is soo good! I love the metaphor about her being just a shell of a once human. Its very short but meaningful, great job, 5/5!

    Ana*