Heavenly Second

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 3, 2005


In one second
Had you had
A moment in my eyes to see
This pure love
One second in mine eyes
Listen softly
Among the angels
Voices of songs
Where every things
Perfect as can be
Living life
With no boundaries
Your love
Is flowing through
You'll find me on a hill
Thinking
About you and me
Where my mind is right
Where my heart
Is buried deep in you
That's one second
Of your love to me
Let me relive that
Don't leave me here
My life was too perfect

Ya ya i know, it doesn't rhyme, but please vote and comment! THANX!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    For a non rhyming poem, this was beautiful. I don't know why, but I pictured angels singing in my head while I was reading this. I loved this line: "That's one second Of your love to me Let me relive that Don't leave me here My life was too perfect" So sweet.

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    It's ok. Not all poems need to rhyme, and this one was good enough without it. I liked it a lot. Take care and God bless.

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. yea well it doesnt rhyme but not all poems do! still a very excellent poem. Great way to express yourself! Loved it and enjoyed the read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! another amazing poem, all poems dont have to rhyme to be good.

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