An Empty Space

by Jemma   Aug 6, 2005


Pull your curtains back
Staring at the world around you
The walls now crumbled
Crippled to the floor
Shattered glass lines your room
Sectioned by the fragments
A splintered dream
Lost possessions sinking through the mud
Bare feet dance upon the steady stream
A brown river in your room
Keep to the rhythm
Lost in the beat
Forgot the pummelling
The pounding of your heart
When your framework fell apart
When the bricks gave way
Leaving you with nothing
Just an empty space
To fill your thoughts with

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  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    You are a very unique poet. Your style is very complex and interesting and your thoughts dig deep beneath the surface of what we call words. You can confuse someone, or surprise them by how much they can relate. Your words are not from the tounge or hand, they are from the heart, mind and soul. Your ideas of what an object or feeling is,is very different and almost magical in a sense, undescribable in themselves.
    Intense poem, deep meanings and ideas. Keep on writing!

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