I Couldn't Go Back to Sleep

by I WhoWhatNow   Aug 7, 2005


This morning I woke up
I sat up and thought
About a life where no one
Cried, screamed, or fought
There was only kindness
Good hearts, and true smiles
All you could see was good
Across miles and miles
I thought and I pondered
And I looked down to weep
I had, had a perfect dream
But I couldn’t go back to sleep

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  • 18 years ago

    by katie hensley

    Wow. very good. i like how the rymes werent forced. u let it flow. keep it up!! -k-

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Too bad some dreams can't be reality. Awesome job!

  • 18 years ago

    by .+*Jess*+.

    I love it its really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    good poem