Daddy Never Came Home

by JussxAxNobody   Aug 8, 2005


Daddy said he was coming home.
-He lied!
Mommy told me he was late.
-She lied!
Sissy said he was just taking a longer drive.
-SHE LIED!
Ms. Taylor said to keep my chin up.
-I tried.
When sissy told me the news.
-I cried.
I knew he was never coming back.
-I sighed.
Granny asked for a tissue at the funeral...
-He died.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mallory

    Hey there, gah I havent talked to you in forever! how have u been? anyways....I lik this poem, its sad, but i lik it. ummm Im not crazy bout the structure though... with the line then the - then 2 words....lol.....what? if you changed it and added more, i dont really know what else more, but somethin, would make it a tad better but i lik it....the ending was kinda unexpecting i was all :0 @ the end lol but yea :( so, yea.....i guess ill ttyl...maybe
    ~Mal

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    So sad. I liked the way you wrote it.
    wish you the best,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    SAD IF TRUE...BUT ALL AND ALL I LOVE IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK...

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