So LoSt

by AhmadAfaneh   Aug 9, 2005


I look around I feel so lost
I see that nothing is what i got
I cant find myself at all
So tell me who am I after all ?

I've been left out in the dark
To face, alone, that huge shark
I am screaming but no one is hearing
Because everyone got his own fearing

I know I never gonna beat mine
And every thing is never gonna be fine
All I wanna do is to hide with no sound
Until I'll be found

Do you think I'll get some support ?
Do you think I am gonna anchor in any port?
No, nothing is gonna be alright
And all I should do is to fight.

The_Lonesome_89@hotmail.com
Ahmed_Afanah@yahoo.co.uk

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  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    try not to rhyme the same words to much. and don't try to force the rhyming, try not to think about what your going to write..just write let the flow go and don't think about it..but other then that your poems are perfect, keep up the good work :)
    always keep writting.
    XO-Kit-OX

  • 18 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    your rhyme was all over the place.. your imaginery didnt match what you were saying.. was as if you put it in because it "fit" better!!!
    Didn't really get the hidden message either lo.. or it could just be me! good attempt anyway.. keep trying!
    Kt xxxx

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