The child in my heart

by wendy   Aug 10, 2005


When I'm awake and when i sleep
someone in my heart i will always keep
a child of love a child of hope
because of him is how i cope
the pain and stress that my life brings
but my love for him my heart still sings
he born to me in my young life
in my heart it cuts like a knife
he was took from me so very young
but my memories of him are still sung
so always remember where ever you are
in my heart you will never be far

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    "because of him is how i cope" - I think you should rearrange this line somehow...maybe something like "because of him I am able to cope." The line doesn't really make sense the way you worded it, though I can understand what you mean.

    "he born to me in my young life
    in my heart it cuts like a knife
    he was took from me so very young"

    *he was born...
    *he was taken...

    Nice work. You have a certain style, short and rhyming...it's good, but it could use some work...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    Well I don't know how that is but I'm sure it must be really hard. and whereever he is I bet your in his heart too..
    I got the rest of your comments..thanks. and I sent you a message I hope you got it.
    Christina

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