*tear* I know that feeling, and you captured it sooo well. Great job! *bows*

WOW! THIS POEM IS JUST AMAZING! IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET!!!! I really liked your use of words and the phrases! WOW! KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WORK!!!!!

Oh my God that was Awsome I Loved It continue writing you are a very talented poet - I felt as if i was there with you in that dream and for a perfect dream you got a perfect score

Wow this poem is so nice, as if it truly was real. A fairy tale come to life....

Hi Danielle, nice try
your poem made my heart cry
and in a good way
i really hope you would stay
keep working on the words you pour
i would really love to read more
all the best.. ~regards~

“You are so beautiful you make the angels envious.”
that line is superb... keep up the good work..

omg i want that to happen to me lol!

Hey that is an awsome poem! I was wounering every time you write a poem can u send it to me ! @ rikki_archuleta@yahoo.com! Keep up the good work!

hmm how to say but its so great Loving your poem,,,,,,,,, keep it up

all i can say is WOW! that is a really great poem you are a very gifted writter. Keep up the good work

Wow... I really enjoyed your poem. It 's was sweet and amazing

its brill dont doubt ure talent..ure a star in the making! well done

I thought it was a great poem and well written. Hope your dreams become your reality.

That poem was so amazing. Me and my friend Becky ( who's also a member on this site ) both loved it. It's so romantic. Both of us are big soppy romantics and this really got to us both. We wish our boyfriends said that kind of stuff still. You're very lucky to be with him if thats a true story and you're a very talented writer. don't ever stop. Take care. Love always xxx Becky and Millie xxx

This is so sweet and its a greAT POEM

Beautiful... that poem was really good, i thought it was breath taking and showed alot of emotion.

Aww.. that just made me cry.. its so moving and heartfelt.. amazing piece.. u showed me a different meaning to a love poem (im not reli a big fan of these poems :D) ur rhyme was in place and ur flow wasnt so bad.. ur choice of words just touching. :D
keep it up
check sm of mine if u can
nannoush

W0w... this poem is absolutly a-m-a-z-i-n-g!!! it truly brought tears to my eyes... and the weird part about this hole poem and why i like it so much is cuz ur "dream" really happend to me!!! i love ur poem gurl so u better keep writing cuz ur going into my favorites! 5/5 i LOVED it!

xoxoxo
*.:morgan:.*

I think every girl dreams to have such a dream...wonderfull poem!..luved it!

Omg thats sooooo sweet i wish that could happen to me lol i loved ur poem it was really good keep up the good work

ASHLEY
aka Ashlick