Omg thats sooooo sweet i wish that could happen to me lol i loved ur poem it was really good keep up the good work

ASHLEY
aka Ashlick

AWWW i think it is really great I loved it. There is not enough words to describe how i am feeling right now and I am reading it on Valentine's day so it makes the poem really really sweet. If any guy said that I think alot of girls would melt! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

That was one of the best poems I've ever read............you have talent.....keep it up.........always do what pleases You............e-mail me sometime..........
xoxo
Cassie

My God,this poem is awesome.I'm putting you under my favorites,and you get my 5.You deserve much more than a 5.

Woow thats amazing i wish i could write happy poems like that =]
yew totally deserve a mssive big 5 for that =]
alice

Hey great poem, i cant believe it was ur first!
mi first sounded like a 2 year old wrote it! lol
mmm well great job 10/10!
love ya mel

WOW that was beautiful.....WOW

Beautiful

I really really liked it ...

Awesome poem its so cute!!

Wowza great poem.... keep up the great wok u'll go far!

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Great work =) keep up the good work, glad you didnt stop after this poem all yoru ones are GREAT

Its very good very sweet i had a dream that reminded me of this poem but i woke up crying because i knew it could never be true as well as that moment being lost forever :(

good write
-laura-

I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job.

Nice poem! Love It!!

Wow this was a great poem i wish i could write things like this. im too much of an amature to have anything this deep. but i feel where your coming from ive had a dream like this aswell.

Wow, that was amazing! One of the sweetest love poems I read, you had so much feeling and emotion in it, it was just perfect! I really enjoyed reading this, and hope you do keep on writing!

Bravo!! this poem is absouletly beautiful in every single way. it was great. so deep and so pure. very heartfelt. simply wonderful to read.

He took my hands in his,
As he stared at me with a twinkle in his eye.
"You are so beautiful you make the angels envious."
"The rain we feel are tears they cry."

i loved that stanza especially the very last line. very powerful, and it held so much meaning. this poem was truly one of my favorites. a lovely piece of work. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

That was nicely written..keep it up..5/5 ^_^