Sweetheart

by Naomi   Aug 12, 2005


Oh baby, how I long for you
Oh baby, how I regret my choice
Oh baby, if only they knew
Oh baby, I wish they’d hear my voice

Little angel, how I miss you
Little angel, we never even met
Little angel, I wish it wasn’t true
Little angel, it is my biggest regret

Sweetheart, please forgive me
Sweetheart, don’t ever leave my side
Sweetheart, at least you’re now free
Sweetheart, I tried but you still died

Oh baby, you’re an angel now
Oh baby, one of the sweetest kind
Oh baby, this is my solemn vow
Oh baby, every day of my life you’ll be in my mind

We’ll meet among the stars
Tonight will be our night
You’ll heal my scars
And together we’ll be alright

This is for the baby I never met
The baby I lost
And forever will regret
Not a day will go by
When I don’t think of that day
The angel in the sky
My baby, today, forever and in every way.

**Constructive criticism very much welcome**

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  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    I love it, the repetition of sweetheart and baby, in any other context would be a bit full on, but cos of the subject its so heartbreaking. And then when you move awayfrom the repetitino in thelast couple of stanzas...it really struck a chord with me, its amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by williamcampbell

    Awesome poem. I've read many of yours on here. You are very talented

  • 18 years ago

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