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by Katrina Boblina Aug 12, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
His voice still rings inside my head. that word "Love" simply dead. We spent every day and every waking hour holding hands our love a strong power. The days seemed too short, the time apart too long. But it got me through when I waited and stayed strong. But that day I remember, as I remember yesterday, when he told me the war needed him to go away. That next month was so romantic as we spent time together as the time continued to tick. But that day came, the day of which I despise, He left me alone as my heart filled with silent cries. I waited for days weeks and months too before getting the note somehow the words I knew. The dirtied paper told me it was over he had gone missing confirmed to be forever. I cried all night and for days that followed and I knew I had to give up And let my heart be hollowed. I met someone else we loved each other so nothing compared to my soldier but my heart began to grow. Our love seemed to be able to continue forever until another letter I received for it to come, i thought never. From my first true love it held the words i dread he was coming home safe and wanting us to wed. Tears filled my eyes and I knew love was much too complicated for me two loves was the cause. He came home soon from the horrible war and hugged me tightly until my arms became soar. My new love walked in and stared at the stranger a triangle of love put my heart in danger.
by kiesha
Whoah! What a crazy twist to things! That was very well written. I liked the story behind the poem. You did a wonderful job on this one. I hope things work out. Take care. ><> Kiesha
by Sarah Lea
that was a great poem