I Wanted you Back

by Katrina Boblina   Apr 28, 2006


Heart in my hand
blood seeping through
this must be a dream...
I've just killed you.

nails in your hands
and your stuck to a chair
an open hole
your heart once there.

I lick my hands clean,
salty and sweet,
I crawl toward your body
sitting limp in my seat.

I cut out your eye,
its still in a jar,
I never thought
I would take it this far

I feel a sudden anger
that you had to die
I stare directly into
your only blank eye.

I shake your arms
thinking your here
I missed you somehow
so I yell in your ear.

"wake up!" "come back!"
I'm not done with you
"you coward!" "you bi ch"
my anger so true.

I put back your heart
stitch it with care
staple it in hopes
it will remain there.

you still need an eye
so I reach for my own
I grab an old knife
and let out a moan.

I give it to you
to make you complete
my life and my death
began to compete.

I fall to the ground
my heart beating fast.
you... coming to life
was what i saw last.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Lovely. I don't think your trying to hard at all myself. Maybe try to write dark poems when your angry or upset and the descriptions might work out better for you. And the stanzas were short and choppy which is okay but if your going to go into gruesome detail maybe have them longer with more edge that would really help your poem here
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Oh my gosh! I LOVED this poem! Love Love LOOOVED it. Okay, I'm done obsessing. >.>

    Anyways, I liked the who concept of it, and how you made it so gruesome. When you cut out your eye to complete his body was my favorite part. I thought the flow was amazing, as were your use of words!

    Great job!

    Cayce xx

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I put back your heart
    stitch it with care
    staple it in hopes
    it will remain there.

    (My absolute FAVORITE line)

    Amazing job... To me, there is no such thing as being 'too morbid'.. H*ll I've read darker before and loved it. But anyways, this was amazing. You wrote this beautifully and it's not like every other poem you read. Great job..

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    .. omg .. you're really good ;) great poem babe! 5/5 you deserve no less! again.. great job

    fav stanza:
    I give it to you
    to make you complete
    my life and my death
    began to compete.
    (u said you like advice, began .. try begin.. i think it sounds better but thats just me its still a great poem!)

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A nice poem that is written so greatly. I really like the flow of the poem, great job
    5/5

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