The End

by Sourav   Aug 16, 2005


Have you seen me crying?
Have you seen me dieing?
All these times I was trying
Believe me I was not lying

I wasn't lying at all
Always honest to love’s call
I always tried to stand tall
Now you see how I fall
You never enjoyed my rising

I always tried to fly high
Tried to change wrong to right
You were all the time in my sight
Now I’m flying my lonesome flight
My tears always make you shining

I always tried to stop my tears
Always fought with all my fears
You turned away & ruined my cheers
Now I’m going down with failed endeavors
My effusion always keeps you smiling

I thought you are happy with me
You used to look so honest with your glee
Now I’m in the dark & all at sea
You changed my life, changed my destiny
I know you love to see me drowning

Do you enjoy see me crying?
Do you relish as I’m dieing
Thanks for abandon me & see my ending
Everything looks so blur,
I’m feeling the end but not astounding

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  • 17 years ago

    by smile

    This is a really strong poem,
    your rythem and structure are perfect
    the poem flows with a great confidence

    well done!

    **smile**

  • 18 years ago

    by supriya

    Hi...thanks a lot for commenting on my poem..i am not as good as u in writing poems..but all that i write is what i am going through..thanks for appreciating my work....take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Wonderful poem and really sad.
    you wrote it beautifully sourav.
    wish you the best,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    i don't really know what to say-- that wonderful but terribly sad-- how do put all this pain into words?? you're really good....
    keep writing ;)
    Love,
    Ipsita

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