A Fear In Crying Eyes

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 17, 2005


Can you still see me standing here
No you can't, is what I fear

So I'll just stand, do what I do best
You can sit down, and take a nice rest

Why we fought, it's far from me
It hurts so bad, I can hardly see

I want to apologize, but you won't listen
I know you, and your voice, which always glistens

Baby, you know this, It's no lie
Don't leave me alone, here to die

Love me back, and I'll love you
We love each other, I once knew

k, I know it's short, and I wrote it a while ago, and I tried rhyming every two lines...I don't think I did good, lol please vote and comment! thanks!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by My Life Will Never Be The Same

    I think it is good..i like it..short but makes a point..godo job..

    xoxoxoxoxo,
    Crystal
    p.s. check out my poems if you can PLEASE

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Well it's from the heart and that's what matters... it wouldn't be one of your bests, but they can't all be...so don't worry 'bout it. It's still a good poem.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Clarissa

    hey thnx for all ur comments lol and great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    flow is a bit off but other then that nice job...thats for all the wonderful comments on mine....you're a sweetheart! luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    I think you did excellent job on this poem. Keep up the awesome work!

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