The Queen Of Broken Dreams

by TragicRomance   Aug 17, 2005


I am the queen of broken dreams,
no one can hear my silent screams;

My word are always thrown about,
I try to ignore every bit of pain;
I am stuck in this life with no way out,
while in my head, I'm going insane;

I try to succeed, but everything fails,
my life is being hit by thousands of nails;

People call me wak, I know I'm not strong,
I try to run, I try to hide;
I try to be helpful, but I wind up doing wrong,
but in myself, I can't confide;

My life is being torn apart,
from every hit and broken heart;

Sometimes, this pain is too much to bear,
everything I do, is always a sin;
I know no one will ever care,
in this life, I'll never win;

Now my life's as good as done,
no place to run, no place to hide;

I'm suffering so bad from defeat,
my life has been ripped out at the seams;
from all the lies and desceat,
I am the queen of broken dreams;

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  • 15 years ago

    by JD Irby

    I really like this one and the revelation of the "queen of broken dreams" hit my ears and rolled off your tongue (or typed) in a manner that pleases all.... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    The title is actually my favorite part and then the poem is amazing as well great job with this one its my favorite so far 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Neat. kinda difficult to understand in some places, but other then that, good. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by *NiCoLe*

    Good job gurlie...very nice...and ppl do care bout you.. I do!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Mureen

    Good job duckie... some of the rhyming is really forced... but its still a great peom! 5/5
    hannah