by TragicRomance Aug 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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I am the queen of broken dreams, |
by JD Irby
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I really like this one and the revelation of the "queen of broken dreams" hit my ears and rolled off your tongue (or typed) in a manner that pleases all.... 5/5 |
by Jamie
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The title is actually my favorite part and then the poem is amazing as well great job with this one its my favorite so far 5/5 |
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Neat. kinda difficult to understand in some places, but other then that, good. 4/5 |
by *NiCoLe*
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Good job gurlie...very nice...and ppl do care bout you.. I do!!! |
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Good job duckie... some of the rhyming is really forced... but its still a great peom! 5/5 |