Our love

by ~Black*Rose~   Aug 19, 2005


If I have ever loved this much, I can't remember when.

I know I have never hurt this much.

Nor have I ever longed for you like this.

I live just to hear your voice.

To see your face is like looking at an angel.

When I read your letters, I'm in heaven, nothing else matters.

If it wasn't for you I would have never lived life.

I would rather die than go a day without you.

[ Dedicated to my dearest Gilbert ]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Very nice job.. sounds like you love him alot.. maybe just work on your flow a little bit jus a lil choppy but still very nice because you said what you needed to say and it was very heartfelt. Nice job w/ all your poems & sorry it took so long to comment back xox take care xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Nceily written! i know how this feels so i can easily relate! it was definately worth the read!! good jobe definately a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bredada

    Yes it so good to be in love and admire someone so much

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    This was so sweet i hope you showed him this poem i bet he would have loved it. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Omg!! i luv it i can relate to it i really love it good job 7/5 all the way :)

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