It...Burns....

What the hell, I'm not going to repent. I did nothing wrong. I didn't put this chronic pain onto myself.

I really like this poem of the ones i read of yours i like this the best. in my opion heaven and hell is whatever you make. so make it. i can relate to your feelings in this poem to. the thought of not knowing and not being good enough, but life is life and if you truely believe in all that stuff then its like he already knows what you are gonna do so how can he truely get mad at you. just my thoughts on it. good job

I think that you still have a chance
to repent and love God. He loves you and wants you to be with him and you can be, you just have to make the change if you ever want to talk e- mail me.
much love and Godbless,
erica*

From: rabson@comcast.net
Timestamp: 2005-04-09 05:03:04 GMT
In reply to: It Burns
Message:

...I came and read IT BURNS and this is what I thought:

Punishment is not what the world has intended,
Its a test a trial,
For your survival,
It is made to show you,
The greater things you may never have seen,
Like the really cold days,
Where most freeze,
Being that I am one who knows cold,
I love the weather where most go home,
I stand in it waiting for the day to come,
When someone else will wait with till the snow storms done,
So punishment no,
Thats not what it is,
It is a trial of strength,
To see if you really want to live!

Hmmmm, It dosn't really float my boat(lol I love that phrase)
The flow wasn't that good and I didn't really enjoy reading it..
Its a good idea, but could be worked on.

Im sorry but thats my honest opinion.

x)