My Hour Of Weakness

by gasping for air   Aug 21, 2005


In just two days...
I'll walk through that door...
They'll stick their needles in me...
Everything will go black...
And I'll wake up with stitches...

In a matter of days...
I'll be put under that knife...
And they'll "fix me"...
Take the "evil" out of my body...
Leaving me to heal...

In just two days...
I'll walk through that door...
They'll stick their needles in me...
Everything will go black...
And I'll wake up with stitches...

They'll keep me there...
In one of those white rooms...
With the white beds...
And white sheets...
Uncomfortable and scared...

In just two days...
I'll walk through that door...
They'll stick their needles in me...
Everything will go black...
And I'll wake up with stitches...

I don't want to stay there...
I don't want to have their needles in me...
I don't want to be drugged up...
I don't want to be out of it all the time...
I don't want to have that scar...

In just two days...
I'll walk through that door...
They'll stick their needles in me...
Everything will go black...
And I'll wake up with stitches...

I just wish this would disappear...
I wish I didn't have to spend,
Night after night there...
Feel that needle in me...
All I want is to be with him,
In the safety of his arms...
But they say that this will help keep me from dieing...

So when they stick their needles in me...
When they let me drift off...
When I go under the knife...
Please say a prayer for me,
To help me stay strong in my hour of weakness...

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I really liked this..it was very, persay, interesting. Not much to say on this really, though yet again I do prefer rhyming. It was a bit complicated to understand, but I actually think I got it..:)

    Love,
    xDarkSuicidex

    Forever I Remain

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    You know what I can really relate to this...I mean really...try not to worry! I'll say a prayer...hope you get a cloth gown instead of the paper one...heh. Nice repetition and it really creates the emotions you're going through...the nervousness, fear, worry, etc...I felt all that before going to the hospital...especially since I had no clue what they were going to do to me...anyways, great work. Hope you heal quckly...and they have good things to help fade scars these days...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Hey i hope everything gose ok. good luck grate poem 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Good luck with the operation, I will be hoping that it all goes well, I'm sure it will, thats a really good poem that shows your anxiety building up to what is happening, good luck once again and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Delo

    I'm sorry to hear that you're going to have an operation.... Keep urself strong and we will pray for u ;)

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