My 2 Boyfriends

by Emilia   Aug 25, 2005


I know this is wrong
But it's with you I belong
I think of you everyday
Without you my blue sky turns gray

I think of the time we've spend together
If it just could go on like this forever
If you only could see
That you mean everything to me

I know I have a boyfriend
But I'm falling for you
I know I have a boyfriend
But I can have two

We're sitting in my car
I Play a song on my guitar
"Heaven" your favorite one
That night my heart you won

You kissed me on the cheek
After that I was unable to speak
I didn't know I could feel this way
I didn't know what to say

You're just like a dream
The cutest thing I've ever seen
How can I live my life without you
When I want to live for you

I'm going to tell him about you
I know this will make him blue
To say this feeling I have is true
That my heart is beating only for you..I Love You!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Luke

    Day-uhmm.
    really well written and i hate to say it, but pretty funny. in a bad way. not good! but good at the same time....
    good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Yes, sad that you have to decide. I dont think that having 2 boyfriends is right. There's always a harsh choice and a cruel decision after the truth is out.
    I have no idea if the whole story line is true, and of it isnt then you did a mighty good job in making it seem like it was.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    Now that was awsome! Truely a peace i enjoyed reading!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    Wow, i definatly know how you feel. went through it time and again. you captured it perfectly! i loved it! keep up the greath work!
    lia jnell

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This poem was good...in parts. You told the story in the poem well, and stated everything you needed to without going over the top, it flowed from stanza to stanza too.
    The rhyming however through out most of the poem seemed forced and the rhymes that you did have are over used in the "poetry world".
    Keep writing.

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