Endless Love

by Emilia   Jun 30, 2005


*This poem is written from the pov of a man*

I should have told you how I felt
How your words made my heart melt
But it's to late you're really gone
It's to late good bye darling, so long

I wanted everything
I couldn't get enough
I wanted everything
Now everything is lost
I didn't know what I had
Until I've lost you
I didn't know what I had
But I liked your shampoo

Your lipstick on my cheap k-mart shirt
The memory of you that still hurts
I wasted a thousand kisses to kiss
your tears away
I wasted a thousand words just to make you stay

I hear It's a heartach on the radio and I think of you
Bonnie's song make me so blue

I've tasted kisses sweeter than honey
I've tasted kisses like the ocean breeze
But no kiss, not one kiss
Has ever made me feel like this

You know I still love you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good one! Good flow! Great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Amazing job "I didn't know what I had
    Until I’ve lost you" that so true and happend to many of us keep it up 5.5 and thanks for your comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    I didn't know what I had
    Until I’ve lost you
    I didn't know what I had
    But I liked your shampoo
    ^Its a good poem, but the shampoo part may need some editing

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I think you did a nice job putting concrete objects into it, and I liked the shampoo part, but that's just me. Wonderful job, writing from a different point of view. :)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    Very good, I love your poems!