I’m Not Like Other Daughters...I Cut Myself

by Emilia   Jul 3, 2005


I cut myself again today
I couldn’t help it
My mum wants me to be perfect
She knows perfect I will never be
No one understands me
No one cares anymore
I hate my teachers at school
And the people who bullied me
I hate so many things
That maybe I can’t hate anymore
Everyday is a little bit worse
How much more can I take?
I miss my boyfriend
The only one who knew
That I’m not perfect
I’m just another cutter that can't stop.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Very deep, but even though it didnt have perfect rhyme or anything, it was still heart-felt.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Really good job...only one suggestion though....this line

    "She know perfect I will never be"

    should be

    "She knows perfect I will never be"

    i know it is a small fix but even things like that can distract a reader....nice job...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Raw and real...You have a talent, share it with the world.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Good choice of words. its a steady flow even tho it didnt really rhyme

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thats sad.......and also very sweet, i like the structure

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