Dad ur not a true father !!!

by Spitfire   Aug 25, 2005


Dad your not a True Father
a true father takes care of u
and helps u when u fall and skin your knee
or gets u a lolly pop to make u feel better
A True father will listen to u when have a problem
and help u no matter what it is
He will tell u the truth when u doing something u know u will regret
A True Father will tell u he loves u
even when u two get in a fight

Not My father,
my father never does any of that
when hes away he doesn't even call me
When he calls,once a month
He doesn't even tell me he loves me
He doesn't tell me he misses me
I don't even think he cares about me

i just wish he wouldn't have wasted all this time
doing nothing but being the laziest bum ever

please comment and vote all u want

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  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    Hey ur poems r really strong and i can so relate my dad is a jerk but i live with mine and he treates me like im worth nufin to him just rember ur not alone and hang in there if u want i would love for u to read my poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Tatiana

    Hey yes it did happen to me...and i truly understand ur poem...i feel da same way..ma father wasnt in my life for 15 years and now he decided to come and he started buying me stuff but i told him dat i dont need him or his stuff...he cant buy me wit his shyt n he cant replace da pain dat i felt...I cant forgive him... i cried my self to sleep every night when i saw my friends wit their father... i have always wished to have a father...but i guess im better off wit out him he juss made my life hell

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Awww hunni ur not alone an ne way I dont hav a dad :) and Im happy n eway cope best u can im glad ur strong thx for da comment xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Thanks !!! that kol
    I have talent but not that much!!!! LOL
    and thanks for ur consern about my dad
    i will justsay hes an idoit im treied of him treating me this way

    so im over him

    thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Ixora

    This is a very sad poem/story- it came from the heart and your words are really strong. im sry about ur dad...if u want to find out the message..read the frst letter of each sentence...but keep it quiet ;)...
    *^*crow*^*

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