All the memories....(cutting)

by Spitfire   Sep 3, 2006

As i come home from school
after all the lies and things he told

i see the blade sitting there
its be over 2 months
and i made a deal

as i think of all the times
and all the memories
of sitting on the floor
and dragging it across my wrist
seeing all the blood come out

before i know it
I'm walking over to my dresser
i pick it up

i look in the mirror
as the tears come down my face

I'm remember all the times
my teacher told me
don't bother
or who cares

all the times he made me do this before
but not this time
I'm doing this for me

i drag it across my skin
before i know it
and the blood starts to come

i drop to the floor
i see the blood coming through the towel

do u like????
comment or vote
if i get 3 votes (for 5)
or 3 comments (good or bad)
ill do another one....
i can write better
i will next time...


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  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. It was very powerful. Take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~lynn~

    It was a good poem you should keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    I love this poem! i think it is a 5! it really shows ur emotion....good job! i love the way you write!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mark Harris

    Yes, I wanna see a next time! But I'm sorry, I love this poem, but it's just not 5. But I can see you do have potential. Keep up the good work!