I Cant Do This

by Spitfire   May 7, 2006


I'm done
i cant live like this
i don't want to
i don't know what people want from me
i cant take it anymore
i used to be the person who trusted everyone
and cared about the littlest thing for someone

but now
i trust no one
i cant
I've learned that way

I'm sorry
i just cant do this
I'm really ready to give up
I'm done

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  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I like the words you used, especially the rythmic rhymeless pattern you took up. Love the meaning, and of course, everyone feels this way at one point in their life, which also means that they can relate to it easily. Nice work for few words...

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    Hey hun, thats exactly how i feel..
    XxX
    LoNeLY. . .

  • 17 years ago

    by aliiiii

    Your poems..are so real. I know I can't write like that..but you can. You feel like you're in the same position.. and i don't know about you..but when people say " I know what it's like " blah blah blah, it kinda makes me erritated. I know they might..but it doesn't feel like they could be similar in the hurt..but when I read your poems, and you comment on mine saying you know what it's like..I believe you, because our hate in our poems.. are similar, so thank you very much for commenting and rating!

  • 17 years ago

    by Solace

    Very heart felt piece. Don't give up though your to special to everyone to do that. If you need anyone to talk to just e-mail me. Take care.

    *> : PainOfOne [blaine]