I like the words you used, especially the rythmic rhymeless pattern you took up. Love the meaning, and of course, everyone feels this way at one point in their life, which also means that they can relate to it easily. Nice work for few words...
Your poems..are so real. I know I can't write like that..but you can. You feel like you're in the same position.. and i don't know about you..but when people say " I know what it's like " blah blah blah, it kinda makes me erritated. I know they might..but it doesn't feel like they could be similar in the hurt..but when I read your poems, and you comment on mine saying you know what it's like..I believe you, because our hate in our poems.. are similar, so thank you very much for commenting and rating!
17 years ago
Very heart felt piece. Don't give up though your to special to everyone to do that. If you need anyone to talk to just e-mail me. Take care.