Trapped

by John   Aug 27, 2005


I\'m trapped in a box
I can barley breath and I cant move
I try to push the top off but its locked
There is no light
And I feel real cold
I feel dead or invisible
But my heart is still beating
Its so quite I can here my thoughts out loud
I try to listen for voices on the outside but there are none
This is how I feel when I\'m with you
\"Trapped\"

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  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Hey i reli enjoyed reading this poem gr8 work.....love dia mwaz xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Ash Kat08

    Wow I really liked that good job
    -Ash

  • 18 years ago

    by lover girl

    Wow thats really very touching.keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Ashley

    John,
    What I love about your writting is that you can make it short and sweet, keep up the good work
    -Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    Hey me again if u liked that one u should read part 2

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