My bedroom is my home

by Amanda   Aug 28, 2005


This is my bedroom,
My own four walls,
My own private space,
No late night calls,

No one to hurt me,
The privacy feels great,
No sense of hassle,
No one to hate,

I listen to music,
I fall on my bed,
Good chance to think,
And sort out my head,

Alone is not bad,
Here it’s so sweet,
A room full of quiet,
Only my tapping of feet,

The warmth is so good,
The love is so true,
No one to tell me,
What I should do,

I feel so safe here,
Because it is mine,
No one to criticize,
I’m doing just fine,

This is my bedroom,
My own private place,
I close my eyes,
And drift into space!

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

I quite like this one. I was deep in thought about how safe my room makes me feel. Sorry it's so random!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Reminds me of dope smoking teenage years lol Great write :o)

  • 18 years ago

    by sinister

    Well done. i cant relate. i use to spend alot of time there myself. its still the safest place i can think of and there i am king.

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hey sweety....I have tried to send you an email, but my addy is so fu**ed up....So I have made a new one...Please send me a mail on my profile, like a private message and I'll send you the mail I wrote....

    Much love Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda,
    Even myself at age 46 still loves the privacy of my bedroom. It's my little getaway too. Great job.

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda

    I loved your poem. The way that you wrote it its how i feel. i mean it is my own personal space.

    Awesome poem.

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