Entwined eyes

by Mark   Aug 28, 2005


Where i saw you
Made me smile
Didn't see you for long
But it was worth the short while

My eyes focused on only you
I saw you stare back
But i was far away
You was on a different track

You slowly disappeared
Right out off my site
I was flying high
Till you stopped my flight

You came back
And i wanted out eyes to entwine
I looked into yours
But you didn't look into mine

The magic was lost
The clouds covered the sun
For one moment there
I thought you was the one

*this poem is kinda true, but quite exaggerated, but ain't wrote many poems lately so you know, not sure about the category either lol. hope you liked it*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice job! It's really good!

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Its sweet.. and odd that it turned that way.. overal good poem though.
    thank you for your comments.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Incredible once again, i have felt the same so many times, too many times infact, but hey you never walk alone do you?!?
    Lxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    I loved it, very cute ^^
    keep on writing i like ur stuff

    adios!

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by i love michael naumann

    I really like this poem. i thought it was great. i can relate it a lot.