Let Me Know

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 29, 2005


It's a song, so it might not fit your poets eyes. And ya, I know it's short!

Tell me one more time
Just let me know
Just let them come
Let it be your hearts flow

I need to know I'm loved
I need to know you need
Then life for you can move
I'll let you finally proceed

But I need to hear the words
"I love you, and always will"
Because almost every night
I let my heart in mouth spill

I tell you it every night
My heart skips a beat
But I don't hear it from
Your mouth bitter sweet

You don't tell me that often
Anymore now it's gone
And you know it keeps me up
Clear till nights early dawn

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Very touching, i can understand songs more so then anything else.. wish i could actually hear how its suspose to go, anyway good job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Great job. I've written a few songs myself and this one flows very nicely. There is a steady rhythm to it, making it easy to perform. It's a little short, but it's fine.
    -Kate

    (the only song that I have online is "Forget")

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats really good, i'm a slight songwriter myself and from my point of veiw its quit well wrote xox fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow this was good i liked it....a few rough areas but hey...i cant judge since it might go with the way you sing it....lol...so yea thanks for the comments on my poems...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda..*

    Love it.. =)

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