Thoughts of Despair

by **Stary_nights**   Aug 30, 2005

The ground folds,
I sit alone,
Watching it crumble,
Turning to stone.

The day won't stop,
It's moving too slow,
I'm sitting alone,
With no where to go.

As the world sleeps,
I cannot move,
I'm filled with fear,
As none approve.

My life stops,
I'm frozen here,
I am not the person,
As I appear.

****This one is for you kumar, not about you, just for you, because you were telling me I needed to post more, well, here is one, it's a start! Please vote and comment all, appreciated!****


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  • 18 years ago

    by lovelylilly

    Just wanted to tell you I got a new one...dont tell anyone, I just wanted to be able to post my stuff again..I might not use it for a while tho. love u...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lynz

    AWWWWWWWW awesome! haha I love it... I always have loved your poems. They're so deep. And filled with passion...Even tho we are best friends, you make a reader FEEL what you may have felt when you wrote that. I LOVE poems like that. It's good to be able to read your writing again-- I really missed it! ...I missed you too Britt. Lets not let things go down the shit hole this year. Im here for you through everything, and i love you. Keep WRITING, cuz i know im not the only one that misses it!!! love u girl
    love always,

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    This rocks hun you should definatly keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Hi britt,
    nice to see you posting again, just missed your writing poem, lol.. keep them coming. and thanks for the comment you leave on mydiary, i very appreciate it, hugs & much love, take care.


  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Hey Britt,thanks for writing this one and i know it won't end here...i want you to keep writing and keep posting it here....Very nice poem...take care and keep smiling always....FIVE>>>