Why

by amber   Aug 30, 2005


Why shouldn't I give up?
Why shouldn't I die?
Should I cry?
Should I give in?
Should I try?
Should I care?
Why would I?
God is there keeping me here.
God is there helping me live.
I know that in my sadness I can live.

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  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Amazing Poem! I Love It! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Ooh questions. I liked this one too, I love poems that have questions in them. Really makes the reader think about it to themselves. And I also like how theres that sense of hope at the end. You did a wonderful job on this one too! 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Illusion

    Awesome poem. I can relate to it extremely well. 5.5

    DFK

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