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by Fighter (Ariane L.) Aug 31, 2005
Sadness, depression /
Darkness invades the sky as black clouds form.
Shadows dance in the distance, silhouettes.
Waves start forming in the water, angry rhythm.
Wind starts to blow, picking the sand off it's feet.
As the wind's anger only but grows, rain pours.
The sky's sadness rains upon me, mirrored image.
Thunder starts to rumble through the clouds.
Lighting beams through the darkness, hope.
My screams unheard over the thunder's voice.
My pleas for sun drowned by the heavy rain.
Any sign of hope stripped from the darkness.
My smile washed away with the high waves.
Fear filters through my body as I realize the truth.
Stripped from my identity, naked in the rain.
Standing alone, I stare at the sky, soaked.
Realizing that the darkness has taken over me.
*Oh! my God... not another metaphor...lol. this one's pretty simple though.
by Ingrid de Klerck
This poem was simply amazing, such sadness expressed in such a nice fowing poem! Good job.
by Faceless Mirror
I liked the flow and the third verse was different from the rest - nice twist.
Keep it up.
-Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.
Your poems make me jealous.
Wow, another great.. your poems inspire me!!
Keep writing or im stuffed :D
I was so entranced, I had to read it twice. I love the title it fits perfectly...amazing job, keep up the good work!