Red White and Black...

by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist   Aug 31, 2005


It started out perfect
colors filled my days
But then you had to ruin it
Those bright vibrant colors were fading away

And the only colors i could see
Are Red White and Black
And you leave me here effortlessly
I have no way of turning back

Red- For my blood
in which my arms i slit
trying to break veins
Deep cuts upon my wrist

White for Colors disappearing
And Faded Away to nothing
my heart Is like a earthquake
And you watch it as its erupting

Black- for my clothing
no other color can i ware
My life is one mistake
You'll be sure to taste my tears

-And this is now how things go
Blood spilling out of my heart
If you don't make a sound
You can hear it as it rips apart-

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  • 18 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    Another great poem...keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by pirateRAWRR

    That wOz sad but a really amazinG pOem wit a lOt Of emOtion keep up the GOod wOrk =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    Omg... that was really mad.... i really liked it.... you got some really mad poems.... i cant tell you what i think of this coz there just aint words to describe how the feeling of pain from this poem touched me....

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Wow....sabrina, you are becoming such an amazing writer....you improve with every poem you write....this is very creative, i would have never thought something like this up *hugs* i love it....remember i'm always here for you...

    -brittnay- ((5/5))
    ~Armidillo Buttkisser~
    *silly B!+ch*

  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    Great poem! i loved it, as well as many others of yours, your so talented, i love your work!! always keep writting!!!!once agen great poem!!!
    Always,
    -Kit

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