You Said...

by SoRrOwFuL Claire   Sep 4, 2005


You said that I was perfect
So why did you have to leave?
You said that I was beautiful
But I guess I was just deceived.

You told me that you loved me
But that was just a lie
Now I feel so stupid
You didn't even try.

Now you say your leaving
This really tears me apart
You toyed with my emotions
You truly broke my heart.

You made me make this decision
I'm walking out that door
I can't live my life without you in it
I can't live this life anymore...

HEY ALL, CAN YOU PLEASE VOTE, THANX

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Absolutly amazing. once again i tottaly understnad where your coming from. beautifly writting 5/5

    Love Tiffani

  • 18 years ago

    by PassionatelyMarla

    Love this poem,,, i now how it feels,, very good one!!!
    **doz an1c me?**

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Babe that was HOT!

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    I like it, you have a good meter in this pem so its well structured. You brought a lot of emotion through your work and its something a lot of pople can relate to. My only critisim here is that some of the lines didn't join together to well, it just sounded like ther was a word missing, but never the less, a good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Once again you your fingers and thoughts are blessed... the best of your work is yet to come...

    Have fun doing it....

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