Life Flashing Before Me

by Katrina Boblina   Sep 5, 2005


One last cut on
this day will be carved.
A fight so simple
hit me so hard.

Suddenly my life
flashes before my eyes
I'm seeing the reasons
for all of my cries.

Fight after fight
consumes my memory
All of the hurt, the pain
it's all that I can see.

I know this was meant to be
and I don't regret any of this.
I'm dying as a symbol
that I wont be a miss.

Then I'm starting to think
I almost wish I could die twice
just to see my families faces
when they find there hearts as ice.

But suddenly I see
All of us laughing
were sitting together
our love, everlasting

A memory I know,
to be one of few,
A memory I have
of Me, and yes mom, you.

Too bad I let go
because of one little fight
and at that last moment,
everything went white.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I was reading through this and i copied some a stanza i wanted to write here to tell you it was my favorite one but then i was like dang this ones really good too and so is this one i decided not to tell you which ones i liked because they were all actually really damn good. your a great writer, this is a really cool poem i loved it good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Nice poem, i like the ideas behind this poem. It's a beautifully written piece !!

    XxX Cici XxX
    (Still feeling ignored ?!) XxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    The ending was a littñe predictable, but you made it sound very special, the story where you see all the bad, then suddenly you see all the good. That earnt you a 5.5! Very nice.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww wow hun, this is beautiful, you have some great talent there, I loved it & the way it flowed, very unique and beauitful, keep it up, lubb yew

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Well written Miss Katrina. Well written indeed. Choice words to bring the scene.

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