SO many things i wish for

by The Flame Within   Sep 5, 2005


Another scar on my heart

another tear has been shed

another Love has been lost

once again i feel dead

wishing for my problems to go

wishing for death to take me away

wishing to find a solution to it all

not sure if i should stay

i question my life, am i doing right

i question my going on, if i should

i question myself, what is wrong with me

i must go on, not sure i could

ill try to be better, to make changes

ill try to look happy, to be strong

ill try to make you happy, with all i have

i must fight, but i cant for long

help me fight, help me survive

help me live, take away the blade

help me go on, don't let me fall

be by my side, don't let me fade

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  • 18 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    ~nick~
    hey hun! wow......umm......whats going on??? lemme no if i can help.....you should know by now i am always here for you...... have helped you and her soo much!!!!! 2g much love god bless!!
    Amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Cait

    Hey hun! don't give up on life. Trust me I wanted to but i found something that really made me happy and I want to live. Just find something happy and wake up everymorning just so you can see that something. Wither or not its somebodys pretty face or just a pencil! lol. We never talk nemore! What happened to us? Well I hope that sometime that you'll email me. G2G later xoxo bah byez.

    ~*~* cAiTLin *~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by girlii797

    Don't give up on life, there is alot to live for...like pleasing god. He isn't the one that causes our suffering, but we should go to him when we are in need, he can help us through.

    Chin up Nick, you'll make it through...just don't let it get ya too down...because that isn't any good for any one. Stay Strong.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Great poem and i know how this feels. i hope everything works out ok. peace and love and dont give up on anything keep trying.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    I can't promise that you won't fade, but if you fade, i'm going with you if that's any consolation. We're in this together. All's forgiven. I have this drama off my chest as long as you ALWAYS remember how much I really love you.

    And as for wishing, what good does it do but bring the depression out. No one can spend their lives wishing, we have to live it and not question it. I know it may sound awfully hypocritical, but i regret nothing at this point. I still have tomorrow and so do you.

    ~Sierra

    AMAZING POEM!!!! Keep it up, babe.

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