Kill me now

by мσяιтυяαм   Sep 5, 2005


Kill me now
i want to die
kill me now
i don't want to cry
kill me now
I'm sick of being beaten
kill me now
i can feel myself weaken
kill me now
theres nothing worse
kill me now
and end this curse
kill me now
I'm sick of this pain
kill me now
or watch me go insane
kill me now
my bloods on the floor
kill me now
and end this war
kill me now
i long to be dead
kill me now
stop the voice in my head
kill me now
I'm seeing things
kill me now
creatures with blackened wings
kill me now
slow or quick
kill me now
take your pick
kill me now
before its too late
kill me now
and seal my fate

all rights reserved, © Laurène Ferguson 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by °·.☆.·°..CrimsonCloudsOfHope..°·.☆.·°

    Really good poem !!
    5/5
    i really liked the last 2 lines

    really effective the way you repeat 'kill me now'
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is truly a great piece, with a great ending. The repetition makes the poem lovely and powerful. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by MisterScabbedWings

    I like how it ends. Take Care.

    -PG-

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Gr8 poem...it was totally awesome, & thankz for the r/c on my poem, as u can c i returned the favor lol. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    Good poem, i like the way you write:)

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